The previous comics have been largely dialogue based however I guess this one would be more of a visual gag even though there is a fair amount of dialogue. For some reason I thought that this comic would be easier to draw than the last one since there aren’t any swanky lemonade kiosks. I was wrong. I’m still not sure if the last three panels are clear enough. I like the colouring for this one though which is odd as it was probably the most rushed part of the whole comic.
Hi Tim! I didn’t see the comic after you coloured it. It looks good! The one thing I might suggest is to make his eyes closed in the last panel. I mean, he’s falling, and his eyes are probably the most protruding part, seeing as he doesn’t have a nose… So he’s landing on his eyeballs. Pretty painful, don’t ya think? Might want to close them.
Hi Tim! I didn’t see the comic after you coloured it. It looks good!
The one thing I might suggest is to make his eyes closed in the last panel. I mean, he’s falling, and his eyes are probably the most protruding part, seeing as he doesn’t have a nose… So he’s landing on his eyeballs. Pretty painful, don’t ya think? 
Might want to close them. 
Just something to consider.
Ninja
LOL, i didn’t notice that at first. Now my eyes hurt just watching it… damn you
“I stole it off a hobo.” :D I like that. I’m gonna use it next time in real life.